Black Arts
How the hell this kid gonna challenge me nigga's a dumb fuck,
Got it more twist then if the mic lead was round his throat6 like nunchucks
decent at best.
i'll disable this kid lyrically, the faggot shit is meaningless,
Jacko could have his hand down your pants, and STILL not be "feelin it"
eh
I'll cut this niggas rhymes outta existance without a doubt
Lyrically I'll break the spine of his rhyme book quicker than Bill bust in Monica mouth
no, simile was weak

Verse was semi decent.. coulda been better wording, next time try to think up harder pucnhes also :thumbsup:

Mr. Multie
This nigga's a pro? bet you haven't enter'd the zone vet-1
I'd tell'em to think outside the box..................................
....................................but he's not leave'n his home yet-2
this would be better if it wasn't played
You can be lost and caught in the rain.............................
................................................st ill wouldn't be found ill-3
The only way you'll catch wins from me............................
....................................is if you smelled me from downhill-4
eh..
It's obvious i aint knew to this, you the type...................
...........................................that would lie bout dumb shit-5
And come up with an lame excuse like.............................
......................"he's a noob!, i keyed something up quick"-6
lol.. funny
This is easy see ima handle this dude wit ease-7
Gave'em a shot for the win..............................................
................................but he'll lose tryna shoot the breeze-8
lol
Im dope you wack, its safe to say opposites really attract-9
Black we may have color in common..................................
.......but we're not twins so sorry i haven't met my match-10
played

Pretty good verse. Some lines were played, some lines were good. I didnt like that downhill line tho... But you took this battle with better punches and more wit.

V/ Multie, good battle peeps.

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