Within Eternity's Wither
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IP:
This piece was iight.........you were too basic on the vocab and the flow was
like i was reading but the imagry and some emotion stood out in a few areas
the structure of this piece was decent i like it overall just the flow and the vocab
that could've really be betta ya kno
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crhyme sindicate
Open Mic Hall Of Famer
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