i was really feel'n the flow of this homie...........plus yo vocab was more then
decent...........but what stood out what ya imagry and emotion very impressed

"Pigmated fragments of colours fracture this mixture
As an anonymous tipster drains blood from these fixtures
I throw paint outside the frame to create pictures
It's my life, it shouldn't be written in scriptures"

i was really feelin these four lines and thas good cuz that was just the beginning
it was good all the way through damn good job homie keep it up

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