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Old 10-17-05, 01:46 PM   #9
Vaskez
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All the Illiteracy be done youngin..rile1(real1)...Learn quick
ill Teach,Screw over,& Squash you
..................like i was English carpenters quick to Drop shit
^^yeah like you said, "blah" no real punch to this, threat and "like" bar combined = hard to make dope

vs.

comp nerd, ur not threatening, all u do is type, but im here, so its mayday
he sure isn't going to heaven...but he would die if I smashed his gateway
^^good concept, badly worded and stretched, but it hits saying he's a comp nerd etc.

v/rile1
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