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Old 10-17-05, 02:18 PM   #9
Magic5
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Voted For: Micsachek

Micsacheck

one mic is dyslexic, he could put my verse up to a mirror and still not read my lyrics/
this kid is like a deaf cancer patient, hes just dying to hear it/
Decent wordplay.. no punch..
you not ready, i suggest you take it from step one/
you couldnt make "a-cut" even if you were edward sissor hands step son/
Still decent wordplay.. but the punch isn't there..
one put his verse on the heater just to get his "mic-hot"/
i garrentee i will sweep this battle just like the chicago white sox/
Ehh.. Average..
dawg im hurt you, you couldnt win this battle if text rappin was your virtue/
to much filler to search thru, this gonna be worst then when "john c." murked you/
The concept was good.. the wording wasn't..
you could stay on point but your raps will never be personal/
i will turn you inside out like body was reversible/
Really simple wordplay.. no punch..
i dont know why you you try, we can see your nothing/
one mic raps like he's attached to a "e-z button"/
Nah..
im going to stop now so you can save your dignity/
its like im your school bully the way i take this victory/
Didn't connect..

One Mic

yo yo, im hot on the mic, you's a newb, yer you hurd it
you picked that avatar, cuz your mind is deranged from my cursin'
Concept was decent.. wording was off..
when it comes to spittin dope lines, man, you really bore me
you diggin yourself into a hole, but this aint a fictional story
Concept was pretty good.. but didn't apply to a battle..
your unequipped for battlin you aint ready for action
you gon' learn your skills from me like i was Samuel Jackson
Nah..
lyrically rampant, keepin my game tite
how you gonna succeed in rap, when you cant even spell ya name right!
Decent..

Overall, this battle came out to be pretty close. Micachek had more "decent" lines, but also more lines that weren't that good. But, when it comes down to it, Micsachek had a more solid verse and that's why I'm giving him the vote. One Mic, you should sign up for the Punchline League.. You can elevate without having battles go on your record. Word.

Vote - Micsachek