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Old 10-17-05, 02:23 PM   #13
Magic5
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Voted For: KrAyZiE RhYmEs

Wilky

this kid thinks he has crazy rhymes but look out for the huricane befor you get sesrved in no time. ya i admit you have a strong voice but hey you can choke any time..
Wow. You need to separate your lines, for real. There were no punches in this, and your concepts were below average.

KrAyZiE RhYmEs

yall niggas anit ready fo this
motha fuckaz aint steady for this
Nah..
cuz yall still aint learn
nigga got a 4-4 cocked ina flick
Doesn't rhyme..
motha fucka fell this burn
nigga u aint working with a earn
Doesn't make sense..
im sitting ova hear with this herb
Lets see u touch this verse
Didn't connect..

Overall, Wilky's didn't have any punches.. no decent concepts.. just a paragraph of rhyme. Krayzie Rhymes at least attempted punches, and so for that I'm going to give him the vote. Both of you should sign up for the Punchline League, though. You can both elevate their without getting your records messed up. If you want to sign up.. go here..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211833

Other then that..

Vote - Krayzie Rhymes