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Old 10-17-05, 03:55 PM   #4
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intro is cool with the shoutouts.

beat is real nice.

Inter > flow is nice here. emotion matches this song. its about time that you found a beat that matches your whisper sound you got. lyrics this is nice. i like your last line. real good.

hook > good lyrics. kinda weird sounding cause of the whispering

Limited > Ha Ha opening lines funny. your vocals were a bit too high. that kinda messed up the emotion. lyrics were felt. real personal. flow was on for the most part.

Inter > emotion is real good here again. flow was on point. lyrically it wasnt as good as your first verse.
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