Voted For: Black Arts

Mr. Multie-You had an expected newbie verse, you had extremely annoying structure...you dont have to nessacarly number your bars man its extremely annoying...and all the dots...thats gay too.......umm for your first battle you had some decent punches and attempts at personals.....overall not that powerfull verse...5/10

Black Arts- Your verse made me sad...i thought ud elevated a bit...but still weak punches.....still your punches were far more stronger and exceptable than ur opponents...your personals were appealing and noticable...structure needs to be upped...but overall...6/10

v/Black arts....

rtf in a couple days when the battle is up...1

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