I like this, A real poetry thang man. Your flow and emotion is real good, nice and on track. Your imagery really had a tore on me, It grabbed me inside and somin wierd that I felt about this that made me like it but I can't explain what that was, but overall I'd say you really comin along as a veteran poet on rv, I can't wait to see you on rb.

anyway good poem man props and all.

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