Voted For: Mr. Multie

Mr. Multie



This nigga's a pro? bet you haven't enter'd the zone vet
I'd tell'em to think outside the box..................................
....................................but he's not leave'n his home yet
Could have been worded better.. still decent, though.
You can be lost and caught in the rain.............................
................................................st ill wouldn't be found ill
The only way you'll catch wins from me............................
....................................is if you smelled me from downhill
Nah.. didn't connect..
It's obvious i aint knew to this, you the type...................
...........................................that would lie bout dumb shit
And come up with an lame excuse like.............................
......................"he's a noob!, i keyed something up quick
Could have been worded so much better..
This is easy see ima handle this dude wit ease
Gave'em a shot for the win..............................................
................................but he'll lose tryna shoot the breeze
Your concepts are decent, but your wording kills 'em..
Im dope you wack, its safe to say opposites really attract
Black we may have color in common..................................
.......but we're not twins so sorry i haven't met my match
Oh, my god.. this line could have been ILL. You messed it up, yo. You should have said something like;

I'm dope.. you suck.. it's easy to see you'll fall and lose kid
We're both black.. but your only it because of all the bruises

That would have been dope. Good concept, nonetheless.

Black Arts

How the hell this kid gonna challenge me nigga's a dumb fuck,
Got it more twist then if the mic lead was round his throat6 like nunchucks
Decent wordplay.. not a good punch..
i'll disable this kid lyrically, the faggot shit is meaningless,
Jacko could have his hand down your pants, and STILL not be "feelin it"
Played to shit..
I'll cut this niggas rhymes outta existance without a doubt
Lyrically I'll break the spine of his rhyme book quicker than Bill bust in Monica mouth
Nah.. played..

Overall, Mr. Multie had some decent concepts, but worded most of them wrong.. however, Black Arts came with a bunch of played lines (Jacko and Bill Clinton?), therefore making them not good at all. So, in conclusion, Mr. Multie came with the more solid verse. With some upgrading with his wording he could be pretty good.

Vote - Mr. Multie

Both of you should sign up for the Punchline League.. you'll elevate pretty fast there. It's a good opportunity for you to battle without messing up your record.