Voted For: Drakel

ok..i'm doing it this way.....so..

Theory
1st Bar-good...but u forced ya rhyme scheme in the 1st line.5/10
2nd bar-Forced...hiss is not pronounced like his.Hiss stresses the "s" in it...while his doesn't.His sounds more liked "hiz".4/10
3rd Bar-Nice rip wit the Dr-akel shit..but dickridin is played.And the 1st line....fake personal.Drakel neva cheated or nutin..so..4/10
4th bar-Forced ya rhyme scheme in the 1st line again.Nice wordplay in punch tho.6/10
5th bar-Didn't like this...was flat out weak.3/10

Ok..you had forced wordplay(hiss/his),played shit(dickridin),And forced rhyming on numerous occasions.Not a specacular verse...but decent.

Drakel
1st bar-Decent punch wit the german thingy.6/10
2nd bar-Lmao..I liked this one,Never seen it done before...so good creativity.7/10
3rd bar-Good wordplay wit the jam/berry thing...nice job.6/10
4th bar-Didn't like this one,honestly -_-..4/10
5th bar-Even worse than the other one...that wretch part,aside from rhymin purposes,seemed pointless.3/10

Ok...ur 1st 3 bars were dope.I liked them.Only problem were the last 2...just flat out weak.

But in my opinion...Drakel got it.
Theory had too many problems with his verse...

Vote-Drakel.
RTF........