IP:
"When there’s trouble this kid is always in the middle
Not intentionally and by nights he soaks his pillow"
^^^^ Deep opener
"So he begins to write and putting the truth in every line
Wording was misery and implication was “I’m not fine”"
^^^^My Favorite
Loved this piece... 10/10
seems like ou know about the Flow n structure n vocab shit
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