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Old 10-17-05, 09:10 PM   #3
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"When there’s trouble this kid is always in the middle
Not intentionally and by nights he soaks his pillow"
^^^^ Deep opener

"So he begins to write and putting the truth in every line
Wording was misery and implication was “I’m not fine”"
^^^^My Favorite

Loved this piece... 10/10

seems like ou know about the Flow n structure n vocab shit
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