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Old 10-17-05, 10:54 PM   #11
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this was an aight track...wasn't really feeling the dude on the 1st and 2nd verse...ya 2nd verse was better then ya first one though...quality is ehh...mic presence could be worked on a lil...lyrics were aight...delivery needs a lil work...the dude on the 3rd verse was somewhat better...liked ya flow better and ya lyrics better too...mic presence seems like it needs a lil work...delivery was better then the first dudes...seems like ur more comfortable on the mic then the first dude...overall this was a decent drop...keep it up fam...rtf on "So Long"
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