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Old 10-18-05, 12:06 AM   #11
.Ike.
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ok listening........

beat is dark....coo feel to it....

Hook is ok...mainstream feel to it....i think itd sound good if it was proffesionally done....

verse....ehh lyrically not too good...delivery is actually pretty good for this beat..flow could be touched up a lil bit...its ok....dont get me wrong....but it could be touched up a bit...

presence could be upped a lil bit id say...sound a lil more excited man...


overall not a bad track...keep workin
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