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Old 10-18-05, 12:24 AM   #12
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Voted for 9th Degree

Cezar you tried to come original, and the setup line was real nice...I liked it, but then when it came to the punchline you just went weak, the delivery was weak and the fact that you took it to a different place than what your setup would've suggested made it even worse.

9th didn't have the best bar, it made me laugh a little but its a punch that's been used so many times before, but then, when you think about it, what punch hasn't been used many times before. So yeah, good bar....fuck talking about played concepts anymore because everything is played nowadays.

Overall, 9th had a more comical and wittier punch and Cezar, your's was just half-and-half, next time try to make the punchline relevant to the setup.

V/ - 9th Degree
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