Voted For: Satans Spawn
Satans Spawn Verse
You Gonna Be Catchin AIDS If You keep Hangin Round my Sickness
Im Knockin The Weight Off Your Ass Worste Than Physical Fitness
^ blah not feelin it 1st line played and 2nd line self glorified
You Winning This Battle Is Lightly Expected Like Opra Dating Women
Your Never Gonna Finish Me Off Yo Ass Barely Got To The Begining
^ hmm ok but not really strong i seen a lot better
Im Comin To Steal Kill And Destroy..Bitch I Live to My Dads Mission
And You'll Never Come Big To Win ..So Its Like Your Dick Is Missing
^ hmm ok closer the my dads mission bit i ain't really get but was ok
Overall
Average at best flow and structure text wise are aight but nothing amazing stood out plus it was only 6 lines...i'd expect something raw seeing as much wasn't needed to write
Legend Verse
satans whackest spawn is what your were made to be
votes will go lower than the aftermath of the first spawn movie
^ hmm flip on the name but coulda been a lot better
nigga sold his soul so he can be a rhyming sensation
girl wanted him to sell his soul so his sperm can spawn during ejaculation
^ blah not feelin fake personal and not a very decent bar
go out and get a fucking life just like your momma did
and go make mistakes like yo momma did having you kid
^ momma disses...omg...na...not feelin sorry
kidaint got no soul but think hot wit his lyrical churning
even if you was hanging wit the demon himself you still wont be burning
^ closer average...nothing amazing though
Overall
Ya verse was basic...rhyming was basic layout was not all over the place but wording could of been better to assist the layout...i wasn't feelin the bars as much as S.S's to be honest he had average disses...and your's (8 lines) nothing to me made me go ohhhh ya feel me...keep at it though you'll improve as time goes on
Vote: Satans Spawn...