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Old 10-18-05, 10:52 AM   #14
Vaskez
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This is school and you the nerd im the bully...Ima blokk his lokka
Take ya around 9 years to get to me like degrees for a docta.
^^word of advice, if it needs explaining, especially if the explanation's longer than the actual bar, then the concept's either not worth using, or it needs much better wording. Anyway, this was ok, nothing special, kinda self glory

also, just taking bits of his name and using them anyhow, is not effective...the best thing is to incorporate his name or parts of it into a sentence that makes sense in the OTHER meaning (w/o his name) too

vs.

It's always heat, boy bands or school to flip my name and attack me
That's 3...
...same number of sites I've seen your bar worded exactly
^^again, pretty simple, but well-worded and was actually aimed at your opponent rather than self glory

v/9th

pz to both
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