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I thought i've seen this before, maybe on rb, thought it was by you but if not then whatever.. I thought the structure and flow was real nice, set up the story beautifully. Loved the ending "R.I.P all the families lost to religion" - so true. Your vocab was alright, difference between long words and rare ones. the flow was on point throughout with internals helping it along. nice drop.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211923

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