i love this beat...

i dun have a clue to anything you said except Umpa Loompa, Fuck, Murder, and Prick

Your voice is very immature, meaning that your voice is light making you sound very young and the way you rap making you sound lighter than your voice is normally.. (guessin, from how it sounds)... The thing bout your voice tho, is it's unique.. you just have to find a way to make it sound serious no one's gonna believe what you say unless you 1) be confident 2) sound serious 3) give them something they don't expect you to say. That's the advantage of your voice being unique you have to work your way into all 3 of those..

-Unique Voices on the Site Include-
You
ILL-Noise
Intermental
Drama Queen
CarsonJet
I Daughter Hoz
Artik Phrost
R Rated
Me
^^These voices stand out because of their tone.. So each have already or will hopefully to work with their voice. Just some examples so you get my point.

I have one of the lightest voices in the world if you ever heard me in a yahoo chat you'd know, but when I spit I can make it sound harsh and keep it unique without takin the feminine side out my voice or adding bass to my voice wit any edittin programs...

ya flow was eh, seems like you been freestylin for not so long, I really don't think beat compliments your voice one bit... You using so much energy in this, but it's not helpful, you tryna sound harsh wit your but now your clarity is fuckin up... And i kno it's not just your accent, because I understand quite a few UK heads on the site... but work at it and keep workin at it. I'm lookin forwards to seein you improve,
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