The emotion in this and the imagry in this was respectable thus i give you mines
to me it was kinda poetic thoh..............not too many open mics have this feel i like it thoh
you used immense vocabulary to bring out the emotion and set a mood to your peice
im very impressed especially on your word choice in give'n points......good drop

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