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IP:
what was up with the tunnel sound on your vocals at the start
they got better
your flow was choppy throughout
that has to do with your delivery and lyrics...I suggest writing your lines to continue past the 4th beat in the bar...that may help smooth out your flow
It was tough to understand anything you said
your energy was good though
Is that a hook? Well, it was decent
not a good track...not the worse I've heard
elevate dawg
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