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Old 10-18-05, 05:57 PM   #84
Magic5
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Voted For: Drakel

Black Queen

yous lackin fine wit my text is divine try matchin mine kids
but don’t ‘think yall can school me’ being absent minded
Decent..
you write rhymes for kids novel,I write "Text-for-Dummies"
your dick's too small, wudn't be rich if you turned sex-to-money
Nah..
verse is just clowned..but if ya dick size was seen in ya steeze bars
then you`d have more ‘1-inch punches’ that`d rival bruce lee’s art
Didn't connnect..
you're most cowardly puss on this board, you ain't bad as me
bitch thought making new aliases would give him more personality
Not a punch..
wow, you’re a horrible lyricist, ur verse is just….babble babble
do your words ever have a point? Not even when playing scrabble
Played as shit..
and just forget about creative bars, jus stick ta ya played lines
you're ass will never release an album with your one-tracked mind
Concept had potential... wording was off.

Drakel

i knew you always liked me, but i didn't come here to brag
came to solve the misteri of your whackness, but signs are looking vague
Nah..
fuck it, im killing this pussy, and no other cats will care
cause your style is more plain....that the fucking hats you wear
Ehh.. Decent..
but shes a lover, not a hater, even still after this fight
heh, shit, im pounding bq more than her saturday nights
Haha. Shit's funny, but not that hard hitting..
and baby let me tell ya, you're not just cuz ya think ya thug
i hate to beat you black queen, but they do call me the king of clubs
Cool..
you do write alot on RV though, but i still see no hope in sight
you just hang around that corner, cause one day you might get to open mic
Nah..
dumb bitch's slacking in text, but she aint worried she's falling fast
cause look at her pics...she already knows the term 'hauling ass'
Pretty decent..
lez be real though, she's been here since december, and still no skill
shit, so im rippin' black queen easier than her dildos will
Haha. Pretty decent shit..

Overall, Black Queen came with a few decent punches, but her other lines were either played or worded wrong. Drakel had quite a few decent lines, and a few good ones. So, overall, Drakel came with the better overall verse, and he gets my vote in this battle.

Vote - Drakel

Black Queen, you should sign up for the Punchline League. It'll give you a chance to elevate without messing up your record. You should check it out.