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Old 10-18-05, 05:59 PM   #3
~Lady Fiya~
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lol @ the intro, not bad for an intro... deso.

good thing bout this beat, it goes well wit ya voice..

chorus - catchy as hell, i heard it once and it's still in my head

verse - lyrics pretty decent... i predict you gonna get the best delivery, because your voice is naturally strong, remind me of Pac because you don't need a lotta energy to have good delivery. But at the same time it's flexible which is good, you don't sound boring or anything.. Some parts I feel like you scare the shit outta the beat (I already told you what I mean by that)... Sometimes you can overdo the emotion and prolly don't notice it.

I have no doubt that you won't get voted out this round, you put the stakes real high for everyone else in the competition... This was real hot and I wanted to hear more. Good job on Delivery and flow.
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