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Old 10-18-05, 07:02 PM   #11
Illist
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Voted For: Natural killa

this my 1st and worst line.....and I've already passed ya,cuz
the ghost i'm battling here.....is about mean as Casper was
decent, lol
ur always the last to buzz cos ya shit's always gon be worse,son
ya skills a "chip" on the 'ol block and ya verses "hertz" none
eehh.. not feelin'
so go get ya purse 'n run,ya got no advantage to sit through
cos 6 months ago,i sucked
..........and yet,I still managed to beat you!!!
lmao..
guarenteed....at the end of this,I'll have your pride stirred wit treason
& ya texas as whack the Rangers were this season..(text-as)
coulda been worded better
not without reason...so don't think I'll have ya be the last to drown
cuz ur the only ghost I know that could neva elevate pass the ground
decent

You a "Natural-Killa",but Yet if you Was To Shank Air You Couldnt even Threaten ( Mother-Nature )//
Too Bad Your Only Seen 4 dayz Of The Week,Like Da Re-Run Episodes Of -Frazier-//
NO
Schoolin Me Burnin-da-Hatred,But Yet u Aint Changed,cuz u still couldnt rip me if u Bit Linez,-------------------
yet Copy-n-Paste It//
eh
Im Back For the throne,only Difference kid is You Gone like Motherz With Adopted Children when they Grown//
Coudlnt Conect With Punches,If u Was Physically Swingin N Make CONTACT with the Microphone//
NO
U a Killa,But hey Shyt then i guess Im A Killa In Process of BEing Late For A Hit//
Cant Relate-to-my-shit,Couldnt "CUm" at me with "flow" if u were to Abbreviate With Ya CLIT//
Played
You Couldnt Compare to Me,Of My mother Verbally and Visonly Proved you Were My Blood//
have Your Mind Going Balistic With The 'FLOW',like split DOME at da NEW ORLEANZ floodz//
eh

Ghost.. First off, you're structure sucked ass. no offense. I hate seing verses written like that cos their so hard to read. well, your punches lacked you had no personals, and your few attempts at werdplay were.. well, played. think up harder punches and better concepts next battle you have.
Killa- your verse was decent with a couple ok/good lines some not as good as others aswell.. good drop.

V/ Natural Killa
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