Voted For: Illist

Fuck name personals cos wack names equate to wack punches,
You bent like back hunches mayn i'm feeling like Nelson Muntz...............
...........cos me beating this cunt's like jackin kids for packed lunches,*
4...weak punch,didn't like how you had to explain it.
It's like i'm buying gay porn cos i'm owning this fuckin homo
You're flow's played like Kid's fade, fuck testin your luck n no-show,**
3...again,didn't like how you had to explain.And the 1st line sounded forced wit the multis.
Born talentless, n we know you'll take it to the grave,
Flow so flawed/(floored) i'm using spatulas to scrape him off the pave,
5....decent.
ILLI-terate and ST-upid ain't you got to grips wit your L yet?
Nigga's only nightmare's tryna learn to use the spell check...***
5...didn't like the intial usage in 1st line,as it didn't diss.But punch was decent...but..you shoulda worded it in a way in which u didn't have to explain it tho.

kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts
& It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black!
6...nice.....wordin coulda been a tad better...but it wuz ite still.
This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin
And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten
5....decent,nothing spectcular,but decent.
I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide
A showing of art?..
Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade"
4...ehh...not really feelin it,honestly.Becuz it didn't seem to diss him much.
This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision..
Makin' noise in raps?
Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission!
6...good punch.

Black Arts...
Don't explain ya punches.I just hate that now.Cuz think about it..in real life..if ya spittin..would you stop 'n explain ya shit?No..so....try and make ya verses in a way you could spit in real life as well.The 2nd bar...where you rhymes fuckin homo with luck 'n no show...it sounded forced.Try to avoid that.And in the last bar...the way u tried to rip his name..it doesn't diss.Just cuz the 1st couple of letter in 2 words spill his name..it doesn't diss.
Illist...
Liked ya spit more.Still..you had a few flaws.The rained ya parade line didn't seem to diss much.And the popt art one wuz worded a lil bland in my opinion.

But Illist gets my vote for coming harder wit punches and having cleaner,unforced multis than Black.

Vote-Illist

But this was a good battle.I liked how you both use multis and shit...keep at it the 2 of you.
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