i see you wasn't exaggerating about your skill as a topical head............I am more then impressed...........the whole shit as you would say was dope......but in my words
Its The Bomb Diggity Fresh Fo Real Home Skillet lmao j/p but fo rea it was a damn good piece pretty much on point in all espects of writing i think some minor details threw it off but iono fo real but i still give it a 10/10 plus.......you had more emotion and imagry then anything else which those being the most and more important components of a OM/Topical ya kno....................well in my opinion cuz vocab is good and so is multies but is nothing with out the emotion and mood and imagry to formulate the ideas of the brain to display the visual of writing.........damn dont i just sound so smart lol

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