Thread: A-Sez vs Law_Jr
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Old 10-19-05, 12:50 AM   #26
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Voted For: A-Sez

A-Sez

this kid bends over fo tha fellas n he takes it raw
i dont need 2 commit a crime, but ima break tha law
Cool..
i dont even gotta use good rymes, cuz ur shit is wack as hell
yeah, it means i just put this pussy 2 sleep myself
Nah..
c wut im sayin? my lyrics kill u, ur about 2 die
ima school this kid. battle me? wut is Jr.? high?
Concept had potential.. the wording was horrible, though..

ThatNigga

This kid doesen't kno who tha fuck he's battlin/\Newsflash dawg your not an emcee your style is generic
Shoot off Wit only one clip and already his head's rattlin/\Have this nigga vommitin because i flow toxic
Not a punch..
This niggaz on kool kol-b's dick he needz 2 be eraticated/\Dude givin out dumb-ass votes he's fuckin eerie
Kool kol-b in Member Mugshots wasn't the first time he masturebated/\Cuz like faggots at at a bitch party he always says Fuck Puss-c
Didn't connect..
When this cat thinks of kool kol-b he gets a bizzy-bone-r/\Cant even compare his shit to bone thugz n harmony
U can tell he's always at home jackin off he's a fuckin loner/\Ha fah this guy battlin me is intolerable cruelty
Nope..

Overall, this battle wasn't that good at all. A-Sez had that one cool line about "breaking law," but the rest wasn't that good. ThatNigga's verse was just bad. Two of his three punches didn't even rhyme (generic/toxic, harmony/cruelty) and his concepts weren't original. Overall, A-Sez just had the more polished verse, and his one good punch was enough to take the win.

Vote - A-Sez

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