aiiiight checkin it out. Strings sound mad programmed... Like they don't sound really real. Sometimes thats how you want it to sound, I'm just makin an observation. Like the one that comes in sounds good cause its got some echo on it. I dunno what type of track this is, but the string that coms in is kinda mellow, and the main melody seems mad up-paced. i think you need to decide what the focus of this beat is, and try and rework it a bit. not bad tho, and it has a good bassline which is hard to construct usually. word.

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