Im listenin, lmfao at the intro, likin the echoes, beat is more of a movie beat, I dont feel that if I was to hear this beat I would picture a rapper on this, but you did it well, however youre goin slower rite so more emotion I think, oh wait its upped so much more after th hook, 2nd verse likin that, like switch of speed....hook is aiight, feelin the lyrics, flow good all throghout mainly 2nd and 3rd verse....3rd verse you did real well, I think 1st verse was somewhat weak but from then on it was straight dope, off to download it

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