A Life Of Chryme
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honestly, if you want real feed...this was trash man
no offence but ur hook had no flow. no rythm.....didnt mold at all
your verse was quite simple...no complexity nor though...just basic rhyme schemes and concepts...you have to add more wordplay and emotion anger/imagery into ur shit man....other 2 were bettter keep elevatin 3/10
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rtf dude
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