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10-19-05, 06:13 PM
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SenesIzIt
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i dunno kid...the topic was aiight but it didnt rhyme or flow in more than a few spots...needs some work...i think if you would rewrite the piece and add even a sprinkle structure it would be nice...but who am i to judge?
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