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Old 10-19-05, 09:13 PM   #39
Magic5
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Voted For: flow verse

Flow verse

Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell
Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell”
Concept had potential.. worded wrong..
Kid thinks he’s the sickest rapper better than me? Na here’s the truth
By accepting this battle you got screwed over. Like fucking on a roof
Decent..
He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact
If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack”
Nah..
Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut
This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up
Not a punch..

ThA NoToRiOuS D

My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime
Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme
Nah..
I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew
I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo
Decent..
My punchlines type hard like throwing a horseshoe
My shit unrehearsed so you could call it impromptu
Not a punch..
I bet..i'll make this guy 4-9 in just 1 hush
Hitting you and your town like a bum rush
Nah..
And flow verse whats going on through your mind?
Too late, you're falling too far behind
Not a punch..

Overall, Flow verse came with one decent line.. one concept that had potential, and two lines that weren't that good. Tha Notorious D had one decent line and the rest weren't that good. Flow verse just had the better overall verse. He had better concepts, attempted more wordplay (he also had better wordplay) and more connecting punches. So, in conclusion, Flow verse gets my vote for the better overall verse.

Vote - flow verse

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