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Old 10-19-05, 11:21 PM   #203
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Originally Posted by Dopium
Ight heres a verse/poem collab I did with a homie of mine about how a girl fucks you over in life ight.

Love is verbal reaction, just another transaction
get whats commin ur way for what you did
tried to keep dark secrets in shadows hid
under sheets fuckin him thinkin of the sick shit you did
said you love me & I believed you bitch even wanted to have a house,kids, and a white picket fence & shit
Its been 3 months since we broke up so you must be desperate
everyday you left my mind swept clean like anti-peresperant
I thought lookin in your eyes was like tellin truth
you left my emotions played with im scarred you left me bruised
thinkin you loved me damn what a fool
you opened my eyes im not blind
you look like shit but you was a queen with me
my paths open now no longer my heart bleeds
you opened my lungs suffocatiing no longer I breath
What was sought out to be you demolished my train of thought
and doin shit behind my back only becoming a Enemy
so now your with him instead of me
I never wanna see you again bitch Good Bye,Adios,Capiesh







1st- take A.I Sig off your shit.


2nd- the shit u just posted doesnt make commen sense and if u wanna be w/ A.I thats a weak verse and you cant beat any1 in our crew

3rd- GFX wise you got potential but it looks like you use pictures of artist and just write something underneith......so Diabolic aka Scuff would son u in GFX

So famo ...i dont think you got anythang we look for...........dont take this the wrong way i just tell it like it is...
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