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Old 10-19-05, 11:22 PM   #32
Spektikul
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Voted For: Theory

Theory

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Dopeness...4.5/5
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
Not bad, good personal...3/5
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
Not as hard as the others...2/5

Overall - 9.5/15

I thought you last line coulda been harder and worded better. Maybe try getting some better structure. I didnt like how you repeated the hot flash thing either...but everything else was pretty good.

Common


Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Ok...3/5
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
Kinda wack...1.5/5
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
Funny closer...4/5

Overall 8.5/15

Wasnt really feelin this verse as much. I know you are capable of better. First bar wasnt that good, second bar hurt you cause it was stupid, last bar was actually pretty funny but wasnt an actual punch at Theory. Next time try hitting you opponent rather than their family members (harder personals), word your punches better, and get creative.

V/Theory.................

Close battle.