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Old 10-20-05, 12:40 AM   #57
Magic5
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Voted For: One Man Band

Multi battle? This just seems wack to me. Whatever. I'll vote on your multis then.

One Man Band

battling you is empty, like playin with text be
the pain is intense see.. my brain is entrenched deep,
Good..
into thoughts of makin moves to get the fuck outta this life
the sounds that I write got emotion blurrin my sight
all this anger n' pain got me hurtin the mic
Those were some nice multis.
i ain't gonna let 'em fall til all a my dreams is true
put the kid over some hot beats n' poof...
you got magical music that'll heat the booth
the flow is evidence, the rhyme schemes is proof
Oh shit, these multis owned.
the content is ill, the talk is real... competition I kill
watch ya spot, i'm in a position to fill any position or skill
These weren't as good as the rest.
so called sick emcees got nothin on my medicinal flows
throwin up fingers n' bows.. god bless the mic n' tickle ya nose
Pretty good..
Leavin this kid rocked, when I take advantage of rules
its a multi battle, punches dont have to be attackin at you
Uhh.. you should have tossed in another multi or two to make this super dope.
I could just talk like a babblin fool, in one line ill have as much yappin as you would normally have in a few, and practically use as much of this battle threads room as I want, slappin a broom, magical tomb, laughing at shrooms, immaculate dude, passin the duece, blah blah faggot thats blue, cracking a shoe into a pile of traffic and goo until a bitch with a towel rack attached to her boobs passes and screws a million zoos, koo koo kachu.
Fucking owned..

Natural Killa

murdering with keystyles 'n freestyles..while never unheard,the cypher tactic
like infants chewin on candy,poison concealed..so obsured 'n hyper active
Not enough multis..
cant's say u got riders 'n lactic...cuz u get no milking from prostitudes
just erections,no bust..and direction of dust's where u tilting 'n lost-in-flutes
Man, you need to have multiple multis..
a pussy standing still with the Boston roots...only retreating from beef
can't call this a battle unless reffering to when he's beating his meat
Those multis at the end aren't sufficient enough. You need to toss a multi in the middle to make it multi dope.
kick him 'n sink in his front teeth...& make 'em swallow their plaque
ur turn,u behind shook...i'll burn ya rhyme book..ur raps hollow 'n whack
Read above feedback..
all's you do is follow the pack....shit...a kissin ass 'n dickridin galore
beatin urself 'n seekin some help cuz ur moms up in a cast,a bitch hidin in court
I think you'd do better in a regular battle.. you aren't posting that many multis..
fighting's the thought...but ur pissing ur pants from the nightmare
lunchin in the can and u never punching a man..cuz tampons might tear
You better unleash some fury in your last two bars..
can's run from here...the love taps considered ur great manuever
grab hold of ya breast 'n demote-it..cuz i'm homophobic so i'd never hate to bruise-ya
You're lacking..
& to win?nobody'd choose-ya....for real...ur shit's cold 'n hated,a ban-for-sure
they all came to bet but u staying so wet..ur just an overrated amatuer
Not enough multis..

This was the gayest idea for a battle ever. One Man Band had way more multis though.. and since after reading the rules I see that multis are the only thing that matter.. I guess I'll vote for him. One Man Band had at least two multis in almost everyline, whereas Natural Killa only had the multis at the end of the line.. and then one extra multi that rhymed with the previous bar at the beginning of his next bar. But, in the end, One Man Band had way more multis and his made sense and shit, so he gets my vote. Don't ever have another multi battle.

Vote - One Man Band