Good read.
I liked the concept of this.
Had good imagery.. and decent emotion.
The vocab was great, and the flow was on point.
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The words derailed his train of thought as it crashed into the waves
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That line was dope..
Ending was cool also.. Stay up'
I fed you now you return the favor
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