I think ur dubbing is a tad thick...I'd like to hear more of your exposed voice...but I like how you do your doubles on the rhyming words

flow is good

and with such a poignant question, "I understand your fight do you understand mind" I think you could have been more expressive with emotion.


beat is appropriate


7.5/10


good track...short but good


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