Well Mr. Mystic we kinda didn't start out on the right foot so lets get off the left and try again i aint look'n for beef with nobody on this site i had enough of that on others fo less
agreed?

well this was a very poetic piece but i dont really care where you post something it can still be critique for the simple fact that this is a writing based on a topic no matta how its worded..........nothing really has to rhyme to make sense or be good thas jus my opinion

but this was a good piece vocab could've been betta in some areas, i like the wordplay you added with your imagry, a very emotional but played topic but still it was a good piece
i enjoyed reading it good luck on future drops

RTF on the OMs in my sig...............

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