alright first up honestly aint too great....you need too up ya shit a lot......your lyrics are pretty bad.......2nd person is a lil better....your emotion needs too upped...lyrics are decent........damn upp this up a bit......3rd up you need too up your shit a lot at first you sound like u were tryin too do a hook you sound like you scared of the mic......4th you need too upp your emotion a lot......your lyrics are "ok" at best....u need too up ya flow cuz its boring...this track makes me wanna yawn fams up the flows i know yall can do this shit ya'll sound like me when i first started i can tell ya'll new too it.....so up and drop some more lets see what else u got
Overall-4.5/10

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