I agree with people on the beat, it's not really my thing...the mellowness suits the song though but you could've used a better one. Flow was on point for this type of track, not too slow, not too fast but just right to pour the right emotion into it. Lyrics are good, idea of chorus was good but should've get a girl or so to sing it...would've had more effect I think. Second guy was good as well, you both have sort of the same style, it's a good combination in fact. Lyrics are deep, and it's a topic everyone can relate to. Chorus just kinda throws me off together with beat you know. But the verses were good, delivery was good, nice presence...

Keep at it

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