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Old 10-20-05, 03:43 PM   #6
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Feeling the intro...

Beat is good, vocals may be bit too loud on it though or maybe it's because of your dubs...I dunno...I'm bad at the technical shit. Flow was good, had it on point throughout the track. Emotion can be better though, especially in the "chorus" thing...put more anger in it...put more soul into it you know...Lyrics were good, nice quality too, were very understandable.

Keep it up
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