Voted For: Theory

this Lame been askin for a Loss,A bit strange?
His Nick Name should be Edwin...cuz theory gets tha Big Bang!
3...big bang?..I ain't feelin the fall-of in flow.
Imma make this quick mayne..Cuz,Werd!..Im not worried.
Cuzo its sorta like Botany..Tha way I got this herb burried.
3..first line seemed stupid in my opinion...2nd line is OK,but herb lines are a lil on the uncreative side.
an Hurry?...Fah what,Imma hit em clean an hand em stars.
Theory tha rappin vendin machine..why?..he keeps spittin out candy bars!
5...decent punch,
This cant be hard...Hear me when I say Imma damage this youth.
An throw this Theory out...wit an "L",cuz I just hand em tha truth.*
3...W/L lines are pretty much played,unless ya doing something creative with it.
This battle is a e-z win..I dont no why he wanna push me back.
He better off battlin a mouse,Cuz he aint nothin but a pussy KAT!
4..ehh,kinda played out concept as the punch.

Look, you aint good dude, and here im the boss
So i'll take the win and let Cold-Steal... the loss
5...decent....but steal the loss?..To me,it sounds like ya kinda dissin yaself as u sayin he's stealin the loss from you..meanin before this battle,your a loser.But..maybe it's just me readin into it too much..decent line.
Everyone knows i'm iller son, my writtens ranked higher
Plus I can watch Steel have a meltdown just by spittin' fire
5....decent,but steel lines against him are a lil meh.
When I say I fuck ya up, it's the truth I make ya feel kid
Cuz it's just so fucking easy to metal with steel, bitch
6....good wordplay.
Straight throwing punches at ya chin till ya develop a cleft
& everyone knows CS aint been shit! Since all their best members left
7...dope diss/personal..
Peep member title too, colossus? Get tossed pest
You can bring your boys and take the co-loss,S
4...forced,co-loss,S?..NO..say it in real life,it won't work.Make sure ya wordplay is homophonic at all times.
Don't provoke me son, cuz i'm crazy when im pissed off
And since Memphis got the Grizzlies, you can Bear this loss
5.....decent punch,but 1st line wuz direct filler.
But when it comes to basketball, I bet you be the ball hog
So i'll beat you so Brown, you can Coach with Hubie dawg!
4...aah,ite.

Ok...good battle.
Coldsteel..
Didn't like ur verse that much.U had bars that didn't rhyme,like the big bang one.You also had some played shit.Like..W/L lines are now played.So unless ya got something creative with it...don't use it.And the.And the pussy cat line...played.get more creative.
Theory....
Ok..decent verse.Some strong wordplay at times 'n shit.You still had a steel line,which is played.And forced wordplay with the co-loss-S one.But...you still had good punch..so..you win.

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Vote on the Natural Killa vs Ghost battle plz.