Voted For: Illist

v:Illist

Black Arts
Fuck name personals cos wack names equate to wack punches,
You bent like back hunches mayn i'm feeling like Nelson Muntz..............
...........cos me beating this cunt's like jackin kids for packed lunches,*
booooooooooo 0-10
It's like i'm buying gay porn cos i'm owning this fuckin homo,
You're flow's played like Kid's fade, fuck testin your luck n no-show,**
this one was nice 5-10
Born talentless, n we know you'll take it to the grave,
Flow so flawed/(floored) i'm using spatulas to scrape him off the pave,
tight second lines 6-10
ILLI-terate and ST-upid ain't you got to grips wit your L yet?
Nigga's only nightmare's tryna learn to use the spell check...***
werd his name is spelled wrong lol 7-10

overall i think u had nice concepts but some were played (that first line), u started off soft but ended hard like tha after-effects of sex

Illist
kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts
& It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black!
lmaooooooooooo tight 8-10
This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin
And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten
this was a nice concept 6-10
I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide
A showing of art?..
Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade"
wording? not good in second line 5-10
This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision..
Makin' noise in raps?
Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission!
serious close 8-10

overall ya verse had most categories, nice flow, good punches, nameplay a few times, okay wordplay, wording coulda been a lil better though...good shit altogether

VOTE: Illist

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