intro - good talking. good point

beat starting isnt this a real song? sounds like something i heard before.

verse 1 - flow real basic. still cool though. good job on mentioning God good lyrics. emotion is pretty good. your mic is kinda good but i can hear some pops

chorus - good message. real basic though

verse 2 - ooh @ the stand tall line. wow the little kids line was wack. flow is the same as the first verse. try to switch it up a little so it sounds more interesting.


overal this was a pretty decent track. beat was cool but was missing something. it was still good. flow was on point but got boring cause you kept it the same throughout. lyrically this was good though. good job to both of you.

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