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Old 10-21-05, 03:42 AM   #24
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This is not beef Vaskez, so don't think of it as beef.
I am going to explain my vote for the last time in hopes that you understand.

First off, I would like to point out that both your punch, and Typical's punch were both weak and based around played concepts.

Now, your bar...if you would've ended the last line with "TYPE" instead of "TYP" it would've rhymed easy, but then it wouldn't be perceived as a nameplay.
You forced the nameplay by ending with "TYP" which you took from "TYPICAL" which as everyone knows is pronounced "TIP-IK-UL". Henceforth your rhyme would've been "HYPE" with "TYP" which is pronounced "TIP". Therefore your bar did not rhyme at all.

And if you chose not to force the nameplay like you did and make your bar actually rhyme properly, then in my opinion Typical had the better bar.
So however you look at my vote it is basically, Typical had the better overall bar. I merely commented in addition on how your bar did not rhyme with the forced nameplay. Or with "type" it is not a nameplay, the reason it isn't a nameplay is because nobody would perceive it as a nameplay because the word "TYPE" is not present in "Typical's" name.

I hope that clears things up for you.
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