totally dis-agree... battle tracks done like that are EXTREMELY played, also using beats that have for example a really kiddy jokey vibe to them, allows for a more joking vibe on the track in your delivery and disses basically giving the vibe of "your a twat, but shits all jokes to me, ill just laugh whilst i clown you" where as what ur talking bout is like "your a fuckin cunt, you piss me off so fuckin much i wanna murder you" type shit... theres millions of ways u can approach disses e.t.c... you just need to broaden your horizons and open your mind to more creative ways of doing.

i remember when eminem released stan, in the same week my mate jacked the beat, n used the exact same concept, except to diss somebody with it, but still keep the verses like eminem did them...

anyways enough rambling, to the track

beat is shit tbh but thats personal preference...flow is better than expected, you was bein hesitant at times, delivery is shit to be blunt, you need to keep practicing n build confidence to help u to spit the right emotion, make it more interesting n shit... keep at it.. lyrically, again nothing stood out for me here but again all comes with practice.