Thread: "Seeing Death"
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Old 10-21-05, 08:31 AM   #4
gladbag
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kinda long nice imagetry for real but need a little wordplay with more rhyming but you can improve that just by staying consistant well anyway let me kdrop this right here dawg

Spit piles of vapor that ends up on files of paper attractive
Nouns ill like active compounds a real chemical laxative
Girl in a skirt with ass is an inert mass of sex content
Pay complex rent for one night if it s done right like flint
Sheets spark a deep part of passion, fashioned in quilts
Coo-chee juice flows like a sluggish stream bedpost tilt
Form love wish and cream cock deep with hot heat built
To hang when soft
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