^not really sure i'm feelin that explanation...... plz don't judge my piece by the rhyme scheme, bcuz i wasn't even trying to rhyme, i just did at times out of habit...... this flows more like a spoken word....... bcuz that's basically what it iz..... uppin for more votes, but i ask all voters from now on NOT TO VOTE UNLESS U GET WHAT I WAS TRYING TO DO with my piece....... if i lose a battle, i want it to be a good loss..... not a oh, his verse was hot and yours was not....... just explain to me how u would've changed it...... uppin 4 more votes.....

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

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