Ight, pretty decent track, let me break it down....

1st Verse:

Pretty good verse, vocab was really good but flow was average. There were a few parts that you held on with the last word, which through you off on the next verse. Practice your flow more so you can become more confident with every verse.

2nd Verse..
This is the first time I've heard Ike, and I am impressed. Your delievery was your strongest point on this track. You took chances with your flow and did very well. However, the beginning of your verse, you came very strong and conifident, but fell off near the end. Your vocab was very average. But still a good drop.

3rd Verse
This is definitly a better verse then before. Your flow was a lot better, nothing really wrong wit this verse, except that your presence fell off in a few places. That can be easily fixed wit practice.

Overall really good track.....

8.8/10

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