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Old 10-21-05, 05:31 PM   #10
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A Life Of Chryme
 
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Voted For: Chief

Achilles- Your verse man, not too bad you had some creative wordplay and personals...all though i feel your punches lacked the overalll toughness...gotta come harder than that....but overall 6/10
BEST LINES: nah i wont stop its real talk, my shots hit son my aims real sharp
and u wont start, being a "crhyminal" cuz of a jersey u bought!

Chief-You had some dope parts in your verse...good personals and punches...wordplay was pretty dope...had off structure ...but still went to gether well and overall you had an 8/10

BEST LINES:
This next punch is “PC” terms, you claim to be black but you whiter than the uniforms worn by nurses
Looks like I hurt the kid, have a new alias, so let’s all call him “giga”, why?, ’cause “giga” bytes verses

v/chief

rtf in sig within 48 hours or say bye to this vote...1
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